Black Poetry : You’re Beautiful When You’re Naked…

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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You’re Beautiful When You’re Naked…

    You’re beautiful when you’re naked, as are the autumn leaves in the fall
    You’re beautiful when you’re wearing absolutely nothing at all
    You’re soft on the eyes … beautiful to look upon
    Your silhouette is as beautiful as the first lights of dawn
    My eyes are glued to your feminine frame – a massage to my optic nerves
    Clocked and locked is my eyesight on your beautiful curves
    That makes me want you more than I did just a moment ago
    That magnifies my desires, and causes parts of me to grow
    When you stretch, standing on your tippy-toes and reaching for your finger-tips
    Extending your naked body vertically cause my scales to tip –
    From covetous aspirations to concupiscent voration
    That causes me to want to take you right now … without hesitation
    The plumpness of your breast turns me into a salivating fool
    The roundness of your hips and *** causes me to outright drool
    The movements in your feminine stride causes me to confess
    I want to take you right now … in your nakedness

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what i call naked beauty ......tyte drop
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why, thank you
     
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    Indeed, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder... Great piece of art poet...^5
     
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    Thanx for the read, and ^5 back at ya', with some fingertips on the end :)
     
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    This was sweet and spicy at the same time. Much enjoyed poet.
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname, thanx 4 takin' the time to read a brotha's thoughts.
     
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    When ya naked

    It's spiritual
    Surpassing the physical
    Exposed
    Unashamed
    To be seen
    So Visual
    Your beautiful

    Eye

    See

    Now

    Mental

    and

    Bare

    Laid out

    So Beautiful

    Lovely, joint

    Desert Storm
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm ... That was a nice write of your own. Thanx for the read. :rain:
     
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    nice scribe!!
     
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