Black Poetry : You’re a lucky Man!

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So why would they say.
    You’re a lucky Man!
    You have a Beautiful wife.
    Do they know something about truth in the life?
    You proposed to her and gave her a ring.
    You attempt and you do, provide for you and yours.
    Together you both struggle, to make yourselves a home.
    Bring up the children in manner, so they can one day be on their own.
    The Father brings resolve to many… many things.
    To list them they go like a song you can sing.
    Determination, Resolution, Steadfastness and there is Doggedness
    If he misses a beat and don’t know how to dance
    The house can be a living hell and him a miserable man.
    The Mother teaches the family how to Love
    She brings in the relief that comes from heaven above
    If she is not happy the hose won’t shine
    The clothes won’t be washed and the things out of place most times.
    Your siblings are there to teach and help you grow up and achieve a few things.
    Your Sister teaches you how to dress, for her brother she teaches him with her friends how to act
    Your Brother he teaches you all the new rules of the streets.
    Mostly with him being a guy, how to party and ball.
    These things you get from Family are meant to help
    Not hinder you from growing into someone you like.
    If things all go well, and hopefully everyone gets along.
    These are some things when you grow up… to pass and teach your own.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great write this was fulfilling here poet!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lucky man, indeed. "He who findeth a wife, findeth a good thing." To become one with another; to take a house and make it a home; to bring a life into the world...and mold it into a strong, happy, wonderful human being. indeed, a lucky man. of course, there are challenges along the way...but it is those challenges that make us appreciate the good times, the moments of rest, the beautiful smiles we share with those we love.

    being the father, and head of that house you struggled to make a home...as well as the molder that fashioned his family into a working unit, be proud, you lucky man.
     
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