Black Poetry : Yonaton

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Shani, Oct 4, 2002.

  1. Shani

    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Melodies
    soft as ancient
    drums accompanied
    by virgin's song
    in long forgotten
    language
    is your voice
    echoing
    upon my heart

    ~*~

    As ripened mangos
    eaten in ecstacy
    beneath
    cool palms
    is the sweetness
    of your kiss

    ~*~

    clear, aqua
    pools
    adorned with
    hibiscus
    honeysuckle,
    & spices
    is the refreshment
    of your love
    under stars

    ~*~

    As rich java
    sliding in
    alternate heat
    & ice down
    delicate throat
    is your warm
    brown skin
    against my
    own...

    ~*~

    One
    eternal sweep
    of moon in
    heaven's
    arrangement
    with song &
    melodious sound
    upon forever
    we are founded...
    ~*~
    upon
    delicate wings
    of always,
    I love you...

    ~Shani{R.T.}
    6/99
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Melodies
    soft as ancient
    drums accompanied
    by virgin's song
    in long forgotten
    language
    is your voice
    echoing
    upon my heart" ...WOW.

    this peice is beautiful in it's entirety...lovely...thanks for sharing this!
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so descriptive that i
    experienced every refrain...
    thank you for this delicacy!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!

    poetry defined.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i melted in the vibes of dis piece ....very true poetic
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most Definitely~

    A masterpeice... Your language is enlightening!

    Awaiting your next post
    Reas
     
  7. Shani

    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone, you are far too kind...

    *smiles*
    ~Shani
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "upon
    delicate wings
    of always..."

    refreshing. loved the arrangement.
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shani

    I have to agree 110% with Baller...

    what a finish....

    K
     
  10. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You might be seeking fans...

    If you scribe flows like this.

    Magnificent, Shani. Welcome.

    Rated: :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: