Black Poetry : YO LOVE IS :

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Yo luv like da glist of night
    that light up da sky to my flyte
    so warm gentle & kind
    da kind of luv my heart don't mine

    Yo luv so radiant as stars above
    making me lone for that tender hug
    yo luv is wide as any state
    leave an emotion like soulmates

    I can feel the bubbles of ya bath
    in my mental caressin , strokin ya legs
    how silky they feel thinking it's all real
    yo luv is a ummmmm!!!

    Cascading in orbit into my galaxy of existance
    ur luv is body & soul sweet i'm told something warm to keep
    hot and sassy to keep me from da cold
    where us together can cuddle and mold

    If i could only, i would just see ya luv
    got me about to confess from up above
    but i luv how u accept me openly and direct
    where true luv is really kept

    let me be ya bath water to keep u cool
    da soothing cream to caress ya grooves
    thee gentle windz to whisper sweet notes
    ya summer sail that comfort ya float

    yo luv, I luv and what i crave/ come to me.​

    :juggle::luvu::juggle:
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$TUVG$$, yihd [orvr gi tiehiowa!!!!!
    Oh, goodness. I meant to um type um..something
    Did this man just write? (thinking out loud)

    >>let me be ya bath water to keep u cool
    da soothing cream to caress ya grooves<<

    Um. Ok. (smile)

    Seriously My friend, this was touching and sensual. Nicely done!

    Totalview
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm....

    the places bath water will get...touch...caress. how soothing that is.

    you penned this well, $$RICHMAN$$
     
  4. Proverbs31Woman

    Proverbs31Woman Be kinder than necessary! MEMBER

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    Great write RICH, and the above really got me!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u TotalView ya one of a kind happy u felt something inside yo love

    brother Baller man whats up, thankz for da visit and read


    hey sister Proverbs31women happy u found that part to river ya heart into,thankz
     
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