Black Poetry : Yesterday's Dance

[asimplepoet]

WOw love the masterdul way that you crafted the storyline with such sweatness and wistfulness with a pinch of sadness and hint of wisdom. Excellent write my sister

 

[j'hiah]

i was into this so much, i almost *ahem* wanted to butt in......

.... may i have this dance with you, queen???

 

[watzinaname]

I'm glad you felt that I included all those elements asimplepoet. Thank you so much sis.
You certainly may, Brother j'hiah. You've certainly been missed poet. Thank you for responding so.

 

[$$RICH$$]

all i could do is close my eyez .....this was so beautifully laid out

 

[watzinaname]

Happy I could take your mind there Rich, thank you much.