Quiet Poetry Lounge : Yesterday

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by precisewisdom, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. precisewisdom

    precisewisdom Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday's moments
    leaves tears weeping
    at the missed possibilities
    of experiencing your touch
    holding tenderness in hand
    like the prettiness of ancient pink sands
    once again

    Yesterday's potential
    of basking in the profoundness of we
    unmasked our shared temptations
    of lust and forbidden sins
    placating years of unsoundproofed love

    there stood guilt quiet and ashamed

    if eyes ever rained as thine did
    sunshine would have a reason to fear
    no longer would there be need for her golden rays


    Yesterday's future
    crumbled in an avalanche of pain
    scarring beauty and wounding hope
    mercilessly sweeping up souls
    and into that fire we bled
    fading our breaths into the death of us no more

    Today, I lay in an ocean of mental cries
    swimming miles within a catastrophic hurt
    wearing your face in my heart
    wishing I could rewind time
    wishing I could rewind time
    wishing you could love me
    like I loved you

    ...Yesterday



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    this was romance in da air
    i like how u did dis one
    very nice flow
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (snaps) Nice flow.....quite MOVING.. I felt that.. and feel that...
    keep it flowin.
    You have a way with words.
     
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    this was deep
    and profoundly moving
     
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    if eyes ever rained as thine did
    sunshine would have a reason to fear
    no longer would there be need for her golden rays


    Anyone who could think this up is a divine poet indeed.
     
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