Black Poetry : Yesterday

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nadea, Apr 22, 2001.

  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday
    Thoughts of me
    Thoughts of he
    Thoughts of we
    absorbed my thoughts
    Yesterday, you use to be my
    everything. But, it can't be
    that way anymore.
    eternities spent, wishing
    that you'd have me, hold me,
    as long as we both shall live,
    as long as we both shall live,
    as long as we both shall live...
    completely seperate lives
    because yesterday, thoughts of
    we vanished from my head.
    My now thoughts of me
    and my now thoughts of he,
    don't include each other
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice rhythm....

    and I like the flow of this
    scribe poetess!
    Thanks for sharing...
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, i'm lovin' the flo of this piece, even in it's melancholy...it's quite nyce, nadea. keep on scribin'.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NADEA....

    3 WORDS...

    i feel ya!

    *getchaflowonsis*

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NADEA

    THE LOVE OF HE IN YESTERDAY NEWS
    IS THE VOW OF TODAY'S RULES
    A THOUGHT OF MIND IS DEVINE IN SYNC
    AND NOW IT I THE FLYING FLIGHTER
    OF BLISS AS I SMACK YA WIT DES KISS

    I LOVE YA FLOW ......SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL.
     
  6. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    I just wanted to thank you all for likin my poetry,
    I didn't think I had the talent to write
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scribe on poet for i seek to see how the skill is honed...
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...

    ...This one hit me like a 'poetic tongue-twister'. Incredible verbals, scribe. *Awestruck*...
     
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  10. poeticdelight

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    What What

    girl, this is tight

    ~keep scribin

    *songwriting piece for sure*
     
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