Poetry Critiques : Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

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  1. onewithman

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    Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

    Inspirational feeling as if the world of yesterday, today and tomorrow
    Has arrested and handcuffed the blues no more pain tears or sorrows
    You help everyone thoughts of satisfaction you are not alone
    Shouting glory be to the Most High yes the former blues are gone

    Blessed to feel love and compaction for others so deeply
    Giving as the sun gives light and life to the nine planets freely
    Without prejudice, personal preference be it right or wrong
    Sounds of a symphony playing an awesome universal love song

    Touched on there axels causing them to rotate at the same rate of speed
    Listen to the rhythm of God’s music true and pure divinity indeed
    Each receiving its solar potion of substance equally and evenly
    Make no mistake this is the work of sweet harmony so heavenly

    Be still and intake the oneness of the powerful creator
    A vibration similar to love making’s peak to the tenth power and greater
    You are experiencing a taste of many heights of spirituality
    To increase it takes a mental effect of submission for that is the key

    Controlling the physical takes self mastery it is the doorway entered
    Study nature surrender the lower self to the higher to be mentored
    Ensuring the awakening of the illusion that blinds one of the reality
    To the pathway of a non- destructive being in charge of his/her destiny

    I like the flow where is this poem going and do tell what is the point
    Into the heart because the mind is the reason we have messed up the joint
    Take hold to the message in this piece keep it near and dear a comforting ease
    For there is a saying in life watch out things always happen in three’s

    Just maybe yesterday, today and tomorrow are simultaneously
    Working for you and me by the originator the Almighty!
     
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    wonderful write .......Amen !
     
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    uppin dis sweet release
     
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