Black Poetry : YES

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jun 21, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes
    The word rolls from your lips
    tickles the pulse of my neck
    Your hands trace the curve of my body
    Stirring the fire into a flames
    slowly removing the fabric
    That kept us separated
    The warmth of your hands mold me hold me
    Riding my mind into a storm
    Your lips take me feeding my thirst
    Yet draining me
    The beat of your heart, becomes in tune with mind
    Balancing, increasing the tempo dramatically
    Oh how the pleasure of the passion leaves one
    In a hopeless battle to say

    Yes
    Oh Yes
    Yes
    Oh Yes
    Yes
    Oh Yes again
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow Blue,
    I got lost in this for a minute...*sweating* and *smh*...the wonders of :love: and so very romantic indeed, I like this piece...a lot.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes
    oh , yes
    yes
    sweet divine
    taste of rapture
    lay ya body next to mine
    as the lips whisper in tune
    as da handz make it's moves
    caressin
    pleasin
    holdin
    moldin
    tiny kisses to ya neck
    fingertip stroll ya back
    let get hot & wet
    coz u have me in sweat
    from da measure of bliss
    removing the fabric
    i lose mines together as we
    enterwine , dine and feast
    on a lovin treat as da blaze
    rise to a boil
    bring it to me
    yes
    yes
    oh' yesssssssssssssssss!!!!!

    str8 hot off da press sistah woooooweeeeeee.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You brought this to a crescendo sis, whoa, this was spicy.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister this was
    just lashing fire...
    I think it singed my eyelashes...lol, j/k
    but this was definitely "HOT"...go on..put it down like you know how to
    ^5
     
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    :hot: I love this drop sister Blue...Oh Yes I do! :spinn:
     
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    Blue i likes
    diggin it hot it be
    nice drop sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To $$Rich$$

    yes oh yes
    taste my rapture
    feeling the moment of your hands
    playing my love like a brass band
    caressing those areas that is screamng for more
    don't hold back yes i'm pleading oh baby
    those tiny kisses to my neck
    is what got me crying
    yes oh yes
    you got me hot
    you got me wet
    oh la la la
    what is next
    the fabric is rip
    on the floor in stripes
    two becomes one
    feeling you so warm
    yes my love
    the heat is rise to a boil
    oh oh ...yes baby more
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi queentswana oh thank you dear sister:) for feeling the romance in my flow:heart:
    hi watzinaname so glad you like..yeah ...feeling the flow...thank you for the love:heart:
    hi sister sage yeah...LOL..you so crazy..wow..:) thank you for your love on my flow:heart:
    hi caramelpython..oh yes ..oh yes...i am glad you like my flow..thank you for the love:heart:
    hi sister angel..thank you dear sister for your love on my flow:heart:
    Peace and love to eveyone..thank you dear poets.for your love:heart:

    yeah brother Rich...i left a specail drop for you above :wink:
    peace family
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh wheee, Sista Blue...... :jawdrop:

    Perfect day for some of that :spin: