Black Poetry : Yes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, May 14, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The take over
    Yes
    The fakeing is over
    Yes
    The Waiting is over
    Yes
    I'm Burning you like a Super Nova

    FLAME ON

    Stay warm
    Yes
    Stay Strong
    Yes
    Stay On
    Yes
    I'm Blowing Ya mind like a tropical storm

    Whoosh!

    Get wetter
    Yes
    Get Better
    Yes
    Get The header
    Yes
    I'm Freezing you like Ice so get Ya sewater

    FREEZE

    Aaahhhhh the flow is much coldre
    Yes
    Aaahhhhh the Cold is much lower
    Yes
    Aaahhhhh yeah subzero temps giving you the cold shoulder
    Yes
    Aaahhhhh your A** is the grass and I'm the lawnmower

    SLICE

    Come touch me feel me
    Yes
    Get touchy feeley
    Yes
    Undress to reveal me
    Yes
    I hear ya moans as you say "Python"..."Feel me Fill Me"

    Oooohhhhhhhh

    Smooth in the groove
    Yes
    Like A New jack Move
    Yes
    I'm doing the VooDoo that I do
    Yes
    I'm laying some poetic pipe into you

    FEEL IT

    caramelpython 5/14/2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: QQ
    creative...
    yup i felt it....
    python = snake.....
    baby
    you feel it.... :court:
    you are :nuts:
    ya know that..this was off it:lol:
    i likes....
    :hot: :spank: :hot:
    do what ya do when you can do....
    FLAME ON
    Whoosh!
    FREEZE
    SLICE
    Oooohhhhhhhh...Python
    FEEL IT!!!!!!:lol:

    ok i stop now.....


    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

    Yes I was trying to make the mood light yet keep my fow here some.. :wave:
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm

    [email protected] baby....QQ

    :laugh: lol

    Python
    another great scribe by the snake man...you slid your way into a masterpiece brother
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This made me smirk, the flow of it was very creative, and yes, it had some definite spice to it.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok ok ummm well....i got one..:lol:

    The thrill
    The chill
    Lets deal
    Yes
    The desire to burn
    Yes……

    Co’mere

    Yearn…..

    Warm
    Strong
    Yes
    Tropical storm

    Co’mere

    Deeper
    Faster
    Hot
    Hotter
    Slow
    Yes……

    Ummmmm
    Co’mere

    Bolder
    Flow
    Dip
    Tip
    Faster
    Shake
    Yessssssssssss!!!!!

    Oooohhhhhh Awe
    Co’mere

    Move me
    Soothe me
    Come groove me…

    I got some voodoo of my own….

    Co’mere
    snake man…
    ................slide

    Feel
    Felt
    You
    Fall….

    Yes…….
    Yearn……:lol:

    i know i be's toucheded .... :D
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rofl

    Whew wheeeeee!!!!!!
    Well!!!!.....QQ......I aint got nuthin to say but Wheweeeeee!!!!!
    QQ
    whew!
    Alright Miss MBA...wit your fass butt....lolol

     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    who me.... :blush: naw not me...:lol:
    just ummm flowing:lol:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

    Some persons have been playing in my thread huh?? :look:
    Ya'll need much :help: and I know because im :book: reading it now!
    LOL.... some busy little beavers you 2 have been early in the AM :look:

    Naw thanks for the love shown MBA, I see you had some happy fingers up in here!
    Nita Mae, 40'oz and a chickenbox, a league of their own smurf im watching you 2 but thanks also.....LOL