Black Poetry : "Yes"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rahstagal, Jan 7, 2004.

  1. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You get this feeling.
    This loathing feeling.
    This whimsy feeling.
    Your senses becomes overwhmelmed with this feeling.
    This feeling is so much your body becomes tense with this feeling.

    The trees, they ache...
    Their limbs become weak.
    Colors; Unique colors mask the earth before you.

    That feeling... It wants to tell you something...
    Fall has come...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and da feeling
    the brisky breeze
    the chilly icy windows
    da feeling
    as it speaks in flakes
    da feeling rumbles
    heat up 85 degrees

    it winter cold of the coming
    jack frost

    nice scribe love it flow on poet
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this flow
    nice write...Peace
    Angel