Black Poetry : ...Yes You Can...(Response to $$RICH$$'s "CAN I ?")

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does it look I mind
    If you want me tonight?
    Just tell me what you want
    Cuz boy I got it to flaunt
    I’ve been waitin’ for you
    To ask me without bein’ rude
    And you’ve done just like I wanted
    And now you’re all that I’ve wanted

    I don’t mind
    If you take the time
    To touch it right there
    And kiss it was care
    I don’t mind
    if you take the time
    to love me like that
    and carress my back
    I don’t mind…
    I really don’t mind

    You can see it if you want to
    Cuz tonight I wanna taunt you
    I wanna make you feel good
    Like you’ve never felt so good

    I don’t mind
    If you take time
    You can see it anytime boy
    And you taste it if you like boy
    I really don’t mind
    If you take the time
    To settle in my body
    And lay with me sexually

    I can see that you need it baby
    And I know I can drive you crazy
    I can tease you ‘til you get weak
    And you can do anything to please me

    I don’t mind
    If you take the time
    Cuz your heart and my heart
    Long for this subtle start
    And I don’t mind
    If you take the time
    to comfort and soothe me
    And massage me smoothly

    Compassion may be on your mind
    But by tomorrow you’ll be all mine
    Your body will be under my spell
    And there’s nothing you can do to rebell

    I don’t mind
    If you take the time
    to be a real man
    And give me your hand
    To show me you soul
    And forever understand
    With loyalty and respect
    You give me the utmost caress

    I really really REALLY don’t mind
    If you take the time
    I know you need it
    And I can receive it
    Cuz boy I need it
    So I really don’t mind…
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHEEEEEEEEE'SSSSSSSSSSSSSSS BACCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!

    :wave:

    Gurl I missed you....!!!! This was hot!!!!!

    he really won't mind after that
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep IMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM BACCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    I MISSED YA TOO:D

    THANKS GIRL:)
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, that was tye. I must say $$RICH$$ will probably do that and much more after this. I'm just kidding I don't know because I'm too young. But I have to say I like this.
    Much Love,
    Foxy
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'my can i

    if u don't mine
    me lovin u sweetly
    caressing u gently
    can i really
    touch u there
    and sho how dis
    heart truely care

    kiss the ummm!
    and comfort
    da ahhhhhhh!!
    if u don't mine ..

    can i
    sho my manly
    and be loyality
    fulfill da bliss
    wit tenderness
    and compassion
    of affection
    as i dip

    i can u say
    do it my way
    all i want is love
    a gentle hug
    warm embrace
    as i kiss ya sweet face

    u say i can see it !
    live inside it
    blissfully and unto ya yes
    of sweet gentleness
    i hereby vow
    giveth thee hand
    be one's man
    of honesty & respect
    and give good love to
    keep u in sweat
    can i this time
    show my heart
    and where it really start
    u say u don't mind
    u know i'll take my time
    as we relax and unwined
    to da candle lite way pass dark
    late at night after my flyte
    and i bring wit me da spray
    of just love my beloveth
    and a rapture to capture ya
    essence in for me to feast
    and leave u with a treat
    u say i can
    u say u don't mind
    so u allow me to be every so kind
    and love u right throughout da night
    and forever hold our body & soul
    ya my Lovely G so come to me !!!!!
    :D :heart: :kiss: :heart: :D
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY She back in da house like whaaaaaaa!!!! :)
     
  7. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol at all yall....keep flowing this is nice.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she said i can
    i'll be at my best
    and history will
    learn da rest
    coz dis be of bliss
    a mix of gentleness
    a spice of sweetness
    from da royal
    $$RICHNE$$
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich u are too much!:D u make a girl wanna say YES! over and over again....:)

    thanks triniti and royalty!!!:D
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see u made me flow like dat !!!!!
    Thankz sis.....i wuv u
     
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