Black Poetry : yes, y'all!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes y'all!!

    she's my seed,,
    l'm here whenever you need
    your friend
    your dad,,
    the one who made you glad when you were sad...
    the one
    who dried your eye of despair the day
    your balloon flew away in the air!!

    yes y'all!!!!!

    she's my little baby
    who sleeps under the shadow of my wings...
    who hates it when l sing
    but she's the best thing life can bring
    so l...
    must be strong
    l must be wise b/c somehow she can read the words in my eyes
    so l...
    can't play
    'tis not the time or day

    yes y'all!!!

    feel the need to say...
    she was unexpected
    unplanned
    but hey,,
    a man has to be a man and stand
    clear my throat.. lemme say dat again..

    a man has to be a man and stand

    the best feeling in the world is her holding my hand
    in shopping stores
    recall spending one day a grand
    her love for me sinks my heart like sand
    she runs to me as fast as she can..
    and they say girls are hard to raise
    as my faith lies in the Ancient of Days
    God give me the knowledge to guide her ways
    as l repent for all the girls l played
    it gets that way when you think of your daughter getting swayed
    no y'all!! :nono:

    she deeply knows that education's my rod
    as she cries to me, l cry to God
    she deeply knows that discipline's my rod
    she cries to me, l cry to God

    yes y'all!!
    and l'm proud of her
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww that was sweet i like :thanks: for sharing
     
  3. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something about it when a father expresses his love
    Your seed is truly blessed!(But you know that already)
    Much love and props to your flows
    I stay in awe of you !!!!!!!!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very warm sweet scribe dis was lovely bruh !
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so real j'hiah...
    i really feel you in this one...
    nothing is more important than childhood or your influence on it...

    mo power

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww! This is so real and so honest. I love it, j'hiah.
     
  7. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful

    very filling friend
    ____________________
    yes the soul has found new inspiration
    Geneticsoul
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    So You have been cheatin on me???????????
    I had to find out like tghis too, in front of everybody...smh..You said you was goin for diapers...and ...and....*cryin*........naw
    lol..I'm messin with you :wink:
    This was very touching
    Nita
    :heart:
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:
    :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:


    What more can I say...What more can I do...

    Brother...you are a gem...

    A gem... :heart:

    You've brought my soul to tears...

    to tears...​
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so tender, so warmly written, the way we love our children is so wonderful.
     
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