Black Poetry : yes, i remember

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Oct 7, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we were young. hormones raging.
    hungering to experience that good feeling of
    kissing touching rubbing feeling pressed close
    front to front
    the elevator was empty
    we took the chance
    you kissed me
    i reciprocated
    i was too afraid to lift my leg
    and wrap it around your waist
    you pulled it up anyway
    to grind closely in the corner
    butterflies in my stomach
    it stopped at the top
    we went to the hotel room
    no parents around
    we continued in the bathroom
    i really wanted you to lay me down
    make me come for the first time
    with your hands and body
    i breathed heavily
    kissed your neck
    caressed your head
    sucked your tongue
    until the interruption
    of the third wheel
    so we stole away
    to the rooftop where
    the night was hot and thick
    you laid me down on the rough tar roof
    i didn't care
    you spread my legs and laid between
    found a rhythm
    we
    danced
    horizontally
    we kissed and sucked
    hickeys on your neck
    my breasts
    i throbbed
    panties soaking wet
    you rubbed against me
    in your blue jeans
    made me whisper your name
    softly
    the stars heard me
    and you smiled
    asked me to help you along
    showed me so i wouldn't fumble
    and i enjoyed satisfying
    we lay there spent and nervous
    yet comfortable as childhood friends
    ... yes, i remember.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, this was fabulous. paint the picture with the words!!! reading this reminds me of the first time i read you. why? I'm not sure, but it does.

    blak
     
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    now bad gurl....in a sweet lovin way !
    u took my mind way back when
    and i mean back to da first time '
    yessssss! how i remember .
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb... i guess it depends on which piece you read first. thanks you!

    rich... this episode was on my mind for some reason today... but it wasn't my first time :D i was still a virgin when it was all said and done.

    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flower~

    You are in my mental ma... This was a lovely portrait.

    Reas
     
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    seven.


    you sho know how to take a gyrl back to summer
    nights of times gone by... mmm mmm mmm... this
    was love-ly? sorry reas but that sounds too weak...
    (lol)... i'll just say thank you as i reminicse! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rememberin'...like it was

    yesterday....

    wooo lawd! these vibrations are strong missus k-ness...yes indeed! :)

    alyce
     
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    Wildflower7... I saw everything you wrote..
    Wonderful imagery..
    That was hot and passionate my friend
    keep it comin'...
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luuv y'all...
    it's sometimes a good thang to reminisce...
    shoot! i made myself hot! :lol:
    -7:D
     
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    Wildflower you did a wonderful job taking us all back with you and to our own lives too. This was so poignant a read on how it does begin for so many, those hot breathless young years of love. But, girl, they ain't over yet. LOL
     
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