Black Poetry : "Yes I know Who You Are"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by aqueenpassing, Dec 25, 2003.

  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I Know Who You Are!

    I need to tell you how I feel
    with a poetic verb I know
    you have heard you continue
    to captivate me with your
    words

    I’m searching for another line
    you always give me more
    inspiration that knocks on
    the door verse by verse
    nothing my pen will need
    to rehearse

    You’re pimping me with each
    line making me want to spend
    all my time as you entice me
    with each line like sipping
    on the sweetest of red wines

    The way you metaphorically
    manipulate each noun with
    out making an uncharted sounded
    provoking and evoking me to
    come hitter

    I am immersed in a stanza posed
    in the poem and laid on the paper
    before you naked with the ink
    knowing that I belong in between
    the lines of your verse

    You compel me forward to places
    I am not ready to go but yet 356
    degrees I follow your flow caught
    in your wisdom and vision of emotional
    lyrics

    You’re the ultimate of a poets mind
    your are anticipation of ecstasy’s poetic
    rhythm in this new millennium time
    I wait eagerly for your next declaration
    as I sit with my hesitation seeking to
    see my discovery recovery of my
    hearts inner thoughts that only you
    can provoke in a poet

    Yes I know who you are!

    AqueenPassing
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  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very lovely flow to the poet...wonderful...so good to see you again aqueenpassing...love the flow
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!
    dis was awesome
    da poet of mental love here
    well displayed
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was superbly posed...wonderful ode to the poet!!
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, indeed, now this is a peace piece.