Black Poetry : Yes, Feet.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BallOfConfusion, Mar 8, 2008.

  1. BallOfConfusion

    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know why I would want to see your feet
    I'm a rebel, the more you hide something from me the more I want it
    I mean I've seen some ugly feet and none of them try to hide em'
    I guess your feet are just one of your secrets you keep from me
    It's not really about your feet,
    it's about the trust and our relationship
    and the fact that I love you so much
    I wanna know every single thing about your past future and present
    So let me in,
    you tell me there ugly,
    I'll probably laugh but it's all in love homie
    Yes I'll admit it's a lil crazy,
    but how can I say your my best friend
    when you won't share something as simple as feet with me?


    I wrote this for my friend in a way to try and convince them to show me their freakin feet, lol it didn't work but we got a good laugh out of it. :qqb006:
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL! I love it BallofConfusion! Yes, I would definitely agree that there probably is a trust issue if someone can't trust you with something as small as their feet....LOL...Great piece poet!!!
     
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    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!! Maybe it's just one of those things lol I don't know.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, you sure dipped that poet brush into a bucket of paint marked genuine...this was so real. Perhaps your friend will reveal them in time. Loved how you used feet to highlight the issue of trust, quite creatively brought!
     
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    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! thats a big compliment, cause lately I've been feeling like I've lost my creativity maybe it's just shifted. thank you very much
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow awesome scribe u really drop a sweet painting here
     
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