Quiet Poetry Lounge : Years pt.2 .....It ain't ova "

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    All u did was play

    but i'm now doing it my way
    u said u care
    but burn me with un-welcome stare
    all these years i bare
    truely u wasn't so fair

    All i did was cry
    in my mind wondering why
    did u really have to lie
    now who laughing sayin bye bye!

    U took my heart as a joke
    crack everything that wasn't broke
    now u bout to feel my toke
    when all the smoke clear
    you're find yaself outta here
    no mo fears and no mo tears

    U can have everything to claim
    because i have a newly high aim
    i've release all ties years tame
    don't wanna remember a darn thang
    see i have a true mercyful qwan
    that treats me as her Kang

    So go on scat silly rabbit tricks for kids
    u used up all ya bids
    wait here don't forget these wigs
    I'm free from yo spell
    out of this corrupted Jail
    my love just made bail
    i'm happy now can't u tell

    It ain't ova , yep u right
    it's under where there's no light
    after all these years i found y delight
    that make my heart take flyte
    so bye bye close da door nite nite !

    what !))))))
    what she have that u don't , what she all about
    come to pt.3 as i scream and shout !
    now get Ouuuuuuuuttttt!!

    :SuN024:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Times up, and he means it. You brought some humor into this too, with the mention of the silly rabbit and the wigs, lol, but it gets like that when we vent. Looking forward to part 3.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Yep ! i was a chess board being moved on by false moves
    til i saw the main hit and checkmate wit a reality groove

    as Mary once said .......No mo drama! ......stay tune & thankz
     
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    Hey Brother Rich
    Ok Ok, this is serious
    yet I couldn't help it. I was laughing as I read on
    Oh it is wrong wrong wrong. It just comes a time
    when you got to flip the album, becuase this side
    is playing the wrong song.. Very tight my brother
    Looking forward to pt.3

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    dang servicing them walking papers huh playa?

    wow
     
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    hee, this is loud and clear! hee,hee,hee!
    Well, it's time to move on, huh?!
    Hee,hee,hee

    you go!, rich

    Thanks again, this one is powerful
    Desert Storm
     
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    yes move to a safe zone and be loved as i love u know how dat goes
     
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