Black Poetry : yearning....

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my eyes yearn for closure
    due to my late night sessions
    with my pen
    from all my thots i need to vent
    but sometimes,
    words r'nt enuf to get ova a past love
    thats seems so wrong
    now
    all i want is to be free
    from such emotions
    locked up
    only able to escape
    it seems
    with his key
    but is that what it should be
    how can i kno
    wats my future
    if i cant understand
    reality
    or my past
    i'm feining for ansas
    far less than i am for him
    late nights
    ealry mornins
    give me headaches thinkin
    bout this all day long
    how my heart years
    4 untouchable
    and screams out
    to those deaf among me
    all i want
    is closure
    4 my weary eyes
    but i want
    to awaken
    next to him.

    ~love speaks in loud whispers that i'm deaf of hearing~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very heavy plea
    for thy loveth of heart
    rest , sleep and give
    the battle to GOD
    and awaken to his grace
    and u so will mend from
    hurt and pain da feverish
    lavish will soon burn low
    so understand can compell u
    peace sis.
     
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    I can feel the ache in this, and I have been down this road. As Rich said, some things we have to give to God to show us the correct path. You keep your head up, regardless of what happened, you remain a gem. Peace.
     
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    rich and watz- thanks for always spitting love back to me and others- sometimes u realize people do things to you that may seem bad at the time- but is really what you should have done for yourself along time ago- thanks for the wisdom yall continue to drop.
     
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    most welcome i'm with u never against
    sometime we have to see through a broken glass
    what one may flick upon u is what self should have
    did within so indeed it can hurt and destroy but da
    strong with faith will heal and walk again i feel u deeply
     
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    How often I have had this same thought, being held in pain's grip, that words aren't nearly enough. Conveyed brilliantly, sister. Now you gotta just ride out the pain and let it go. Peace to you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ ...
    you are a wonderful caring person, it's good to be in your company.
     
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    i could feel these words as if i wrote them myself..tight enjoyed the read
    thanks for sharing a part of you with us...Angel
     
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    this yearn made me revisit a masterpiece
    sista this was fly
     
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    thanks fam
    and thanks rich for always showing hella love....
    i think u put a smile to everyones face
    cuz they kno ull always come threw...
    peace
     
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