Black Poetry : Yeah, you....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bert, Apr 12, 2002.

  1. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last summer I said I was gonna tear those pannies up
    if you came to town
    you had no idea how the smell of you
    is still fresh in my mind
    we played each other
    only at different times

    you were one of the surprises
    the dirtiest example of the dawg payback is
    never would have figured

    but I was a fool

    and you were a fool
    and does that sound like a
    Spinner's tune?

    anyway, last summer when she threw me out
    because of my past
    I thought it would be a perfect time
    to re-live some of it

    and I told you if you came near me
    girllll
    if you came in town I'd know it
    and I'd find you
    and I'd wear that *** out

    now tell me why the hell was that so **** funny to you?


    BRB
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hahahahahahahahahahaha

    I busted out laughing when I read that last line. I don't know why but it came as such a shock !
    Well done bruh man well done ! :D
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Was this personal and recent cause it sure sounds like it...don't know much to say about it since it seems so directed at someone...oh hell, regardless you come across well, no doubt.
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte piece indeed :toast:
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once tasted, forbidden fruit no longer is forbidden..and so loses some of it's flavour...

    I love the way you have been writing lately...deep and beautiful..

    K
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one has much humor, mixed with that important tinge of humility, as well. Who can know all the answers?

    Much respect,

    alyce
     
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