Black Poetry : YALL NEED TO HEAR ME OUT ON THIS ONE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YungSoulPoetist, Mar 28, 2006.

  1. YungSoulPoetist

    YungSoulPoetist New Member MEMBER

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    All Because Of You:crying:

    It wasn't the way you kissed me that made me feel so right
    It wasn't the way you loved me before we'd sleep at night
    It was the way I realized why I was always down
    It was the way you played me when I'm not around
    My heart was always broken all because of you
    And everytime I think of it there is nothing I can do
    I thought that I could make it right but nothing seem to fit
    I think I kind of miss you maybe just a bit
    All this time I loved you so
    So much love that didn't grow
    And I think it's time I let you go
     
  2. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely done

    welcome 2 Destee & the poetry forum :spinn:

    i enjoyed this flow from u; the messege rings tru & i enjoyed the pattern u employed. lookin 4ward 2 reading more from u soon.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u just found
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    That was tyte and very sweetly posed
    sometime we have to drop that rose....
    flow on !
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all because of you i did things your way
    all because of you i always wanted to play

    your tune
    couldnt wait to see you soon

    but i waited for the moment when the sun would touch your face
    couldnt really remember the time and place

    because all i could do is think about you
    and was there anything left to do

    Because it was all about you!!!!!!!!!!



    didnt know poet if your male and female no disrepect. but just flowing with cha no matter who you are. this made me think about my soon to be ex ol' man and just flowed wit' it. nice work poet keep them flo's coming.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi YungSoulPoetist
    Welcome to our home...now your's too...
    I love the flow of this piece...the spill was great
     
  6. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you put your heart in that one poet can't wait to read more
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww :grouphug: welcome home sugah... I hope that your written journey grows here with us and your heart fully heals :)
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you better let them go
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com
    love yr drop
    feel on this
    look forward to readin' more from you
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ON THE REAL I HEAR U ON THIS, YO STATEMENT IS SO TRUE ON THIS, IM FEELIN THIS FLO, SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP
    DIS YO GURL SHOWIN SUM LUV

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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