Black Poetry : Yall Dont Feel Me

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    This a little story about me and the upcomming dates.


    The two most important days of my life is comming soon.
    I will be a first time father and a soon to be husband.
    The woman of my life has been with me through thick and thin
    No one in this world can take her place.

    This love i have for her is unexplainable.
    We have been together for 9 years.
    Most people tells me i have my whole life ahead of me.
    Why am i tying myself down to this one woman.
    Im to young to be in love.
    If only they new what i know.

    I pledge all my feelings to her.
    In what is known as a relationship, and friendship.
    A pledge that vows truth,loyalty, and above all love.
    I will not say that together you have made me feel these emotions.
    Together we brought them to life
    It was only her that created the desire deep within me.


    I know some of you guys out there think im weak or even p***y whiped.
    I might be , but the real reason is


    IM IN LOVE WITH THE WOMAN OF MY LIFE

    THESE ARE MY TRUE AND REAL FEELINGS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLACKLOVE

    MY BRUTHA I FEEL YA MORE THAN U KNOW
    TO LOVE IS LOVE AND BE LOVED
    MAN LOVE THE ONE YA WIT AS SHE LOVETH U
    NEVER TOO YOUNG TO LOVE
    YA HEART IS THE KEY
    STAY REAL AND U R THE DEAL OF WHAT YA FEEL
    LOVE HER AS MUCH AND AS HARD
    CONGRAD! TO THE NEW LIFE U TWO BRING
    AND GOD BLESS U TWO IN 2GETHERNESS
    BE WISE
    BE HAPPY
    BE TRUE
    AND
    LOVEEEEEEEE!!!
     
  3. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    im glad somebody is feeling me up in here
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    may God

    be at the center of all you do...that is the only way you will truly succeed.

    Congratulations on your new family, your new life.

    Peace and Blessings,

    A
     
  5. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    i really thank you guys for your support.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R MOST WELCOME MY GODLY BRUTHA
    REMEMBER HIT ME UP WHEN THE BABY
    IS BORN WIT THE NUBIAN NAME ....
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I pledge all my feelings to her" With that line forever in your heart, you are on your way to the most wonderful thing you will ever know. God bless you and your family.

    BE
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You definetely have my vote of support on this brotha....
    That was so beautiful...and so real..
    real men step up, and thats what your doin...
    God Bless you, your soon to baby and wife to be...

    8th Wonder..
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iron sharpens iron

    :toast: i don't drink but i send congratualtions to you and your future nuptials. those two days will be a blessing beyond blessing. to spend the rest of your life with one and to watch your seed grow into adulthood. you live on poet...i salute you...
     
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    Thats the way to express it BL. You treat my gurls like the queens they are and we will be alright.

    You go my sistah Med! Love all three of you.
     
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