Black Poetry : YALL ADD TO THIS PIECE (DANG BILLS PILE UP)

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Join me in this song (COME ON YALL)

    Hook: Yo bills pile up mess my style up leave me wild and corrupt
    My check violated can’t pay and catch up but way keep my head up

    Yo yo my cash on hand seem to smash my plan it don’t
    Balance my expenses, fail no doubt if I don’t
    Bail out this pathetic retard credit card situation
    Pockets blank at the bank awaiting loan approval
    Or face home removal

    Hook: Yo bills pile up mess my style up leave me wild and corrupt
    My check violated can’t pay and catch up but keep my head up

    The world worse than my girl’s purse got no money
    Down yo am I a dummy or clown around town **** crummy
    Face sorrows divine “bro let me borrow a dime”? Oh naw sonny
    Get a job get involve being a slob not all that”

    Hook: Yo bills pile up mess my style up leaves me wild and corrupt
    My check violated can’t pay and catch up but keep my head up
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MaddRapper...

    Now that's what I'm talking about, bruh...dapz..dapz..dapz.

    Share your experiences with the Family.

    :thanks: for telling us how it is to be in your world.

    :toast:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was creative!!!
    bout i aint no rapper
    so i just read everyone else ...cool
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props but come on and add a verse to this please
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loose duce rupt me
    cash flow slow i roll
    cold banggin at me
    no mo style i can't smile
    bills on my head hittin
    left and right i'm down
    on da buck luck dat's
    tough loan me a dime
     
  6. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Money comes in and floats straight back out
    sitting at home broke
    friends wondering about my whereabouts
    can't afford to kick it yall
    let's play basketball...it's free
    down on my luck
    feel like getting a second J-O-B
    one's not cutting it...moonlighting is a must
    bills piling up to the sky
    funds kin with the dirt
    lower than Gary Coleman's career
    collection agent on the phone...I'm not here
    check to check living's a stress
    like DMV eye sight test
    :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    coz da bills on hills
    rolling up fast , past due
    loose screw mind blank
    like my checks cash
    pass empty i can't go
    hard luck ya know so
    i flow on da dime from da
    swine as i swing low to
    da floor where's hope
    dis no joke my hands
    tied in a rope i can't cope
    wit dis broken wallet
    can i get a few pennies
    coz these bills is real
    u feel me ...................
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hook: Yo bills pile up mess my style up leave me wild and corrupt
    My check violated can’t pay and catch up but keep my head up
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hook: Yo bills pile up mess my style up leave me wild and corrupt
    My check violated can’t pay and catch up but keep my head up
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh **** kente417mojo and RICH is ripping this **** out the frame
     
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