Khasm13 : y...o...y?

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  1. Khasm13

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    y
    is it that when i was with u...i didn't want to be with u
    but now that i left u...no matter what i do...i remain blu
    y
    is it that i remember all the little things
    when b4 i got the feeling i was just your bling
    someone to show off 2 your friends
    a nice guy who might someday buy you a ring
    when b4 you chose to hang with women beaters and cheaters
    catz that always carried heaterz
    y
    am i still attracted to your features
    and how u treated me...
    like i was the last man on earth and u really needed me...
    y
    do i miss all the guys jockin
    when we went out and u wore the black boots and black stockins
    haterz were always mockin and steadily clockin the gear we whas rockin...
    y
    do you stay on my mind more then my current gurl
    i see her everyday...but really wish u were still in my world
    u weren't my type at first...so why are you now a precious pearl?
    y
    do i go to sleep still needing to feel u next to me
    y
    do i miss the look in your eyes when i did my poetry
    y
    do i always seem to miss the train to being happy
    y
    do my choices in women turn out crappy...
    someone really needs to slap me
    or at least tap me
    on my shoulder...and tell me
    brotha man...deciede what u want from ur women
    because your not getting younger...only older
    and the times of summer are fleeting...with the days getting shorter
    and the nights getting colder....
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I DUNNO Y.........BUT AFTA THIS POEM IMA SHO TAKE U BAC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL THIS WUZ REAL I LIKE........... I LIKE IT ALOT LOL:heart:
     
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    can't say Y
    but i know this road
    and the feelin
    man lay back and some chillin
    because Y will come to yo suprise !

    fo real . tyte joint bruh !
     
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    Hi Brotha Khasm
    wow this is a power piece filled with deep emotion
    of someone you miss, and the question of WHYand then
    What went wrong
    and of course HOW to make it feel right again
    Wonderful flow my Brother,
    Keep the ink dripping:)

    Peace
     
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    okay...okay...okay *deep, deep, breaths*

    you already know...I am in love with this piece
    it is rare...that the Khasmatic moon experiences
    an "eclipse" of love on my watch
    and...in light of my previous request :angel1:
    THIS IS THE ONE I WANT....Please, please, please... :angel1:

    I am so loving this Khasm...seriously
    holla...
    Sage
     
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    WOWzers I'm gon echo soul sistahs reply

    this is RARE lol

    Brotha Khasm in emotional eclipse :eek:

    *looking for pigs flying* lol j/k

    I am sure my brotha that peace of mind and prosperity are close enuff for you :)

    we live, love, learn for a reason right?

    Gives ya somefin to tell dem someday chirens of yours :)

    Be blessed brotha :)
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I use to often wonder...
    y
    do the grass...always look greener on the other side...until you get there,
    when it's easier to "mow, water and nuture" our own.

    Nice and heartfelt piece khasm, ...but you will win in the end.

    *tip*
    old grass don't die,
    just...
    re-add, plenty of
    Water...
    Sunshine...
    Love...:wink:
     
  8. Khasm13

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    y
    when a cat drop a love piece...
    it has 2 be about him?.....:wink:

    thanks for the love fam...fa real...i'm startin 2 get my poetic sight back...QQ

    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This reminds me of that saying, you don't miss your water til your well runs dry. Maybe the real thing is too intense to deal with right now, I don't know. But before you know it, the time will be right for you and your soul mate. Great flow.
     
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    i loved this...