Black Poetry : Y.O.U. (expressions from eye)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sexually, emotionally, physiologically, mentally, you...

    have me trapped within
    your thoughts
    your eyes
    your smile

    I
    have grown to know
    YOU
    and i love every letter of the word--

    Y
    O
    U

    are the undertow and the ocean in which i swim
    breaststroking
    freestyling

    endrenching me in the wet--
    caressing each
    sect

    of an entire you
    i could sex

    pentrating your
    psyche--
    quite ex-citing-ly
    I might be--
    liking the

    climax-ing
    caus-ing
    contract-ing and re-laxing in
    your
    body mind
    souls in-tertwined

    was blind--
    be-fore now my role's defined
    to--
    serve you and
    love you and
    hug you and
    touch you and
    stimulate you
    in each poss-i-ble
    manner i ever thought of
    or
    knew.


    you--


    (jussexpressionsfromeye)

    express - I - ons

    (see the expressions from I?)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "You" expressed so wonderfully!!

    An absolutely enjoyable peace
    And beautifully done.


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  3. Zoya

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    Thats beautiful sean, emotions shine through...I love it, do it to me one more time.
     
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    you took me on a ride with that one holmes
    with tones of you ard yours

    peace
    khasm
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.
    You made me smile. :D
    This is beautifully written.
    The flow is perfect and the words...
    Very nice.

    *Emma*
     
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    i definitely see the "express - I - ons"..dat wuz beautifully written
     
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    Y.O.U. expressed this beautifully.

    -- from E.Y.E.

    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CoCo, Zoya, Khasm, Euphoria, renae, and vivacious vixen...thank you all for the replies! I greatly appreciated you reading my piece!


    sean.revisited
     
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    that is a masterpiece. I like
     
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    TPS, whoever that is she really got you going! Wonderful flow bruh.

    I'm just sayin...
     
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