Black Poetry : Xtreme Pain (she caused me)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She extracted my heart with her
    iron jaws saying a brother wasn't
    syhht.....
    wasn't going to
    ....amount to a **** thing
    ........but nothing

    she had a problem with me because
    the mirror kept lying to her in the morning
    and she didn't UNderstand...yet stood over me
    with this DISplaced verbal aggression
    to calm her fukking nerves
    while cutting mine...................
    leaving me paralyzed from the love down

    she extracted my heart
    and perforated it with words that
    would toxify the rain
    dropping liquified daggers that
    pierces lungs and leave the masses
    breathless....

    yet I told her I STILL loved her for who
    I see in her not the distortion she
    sees in the mirror / so I'll be patient /
    be patient until
    I can................
    no longer.................................be patient
    ......................I'm tired
    of being patient
    I must sleep to extract her from my
    dreams.....before I tell
    her goodbye.


    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhhhh

    XXXTREME FO SHO




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  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im just sittin hea

    laughin at how tight this is...lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    EXTREMELY HOT ANF TYGHT ****
    DAYUMMMM!!! YA NO DIS FO SHO BRO!:toast:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright blak man handle the business Xtremely....
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak....

    what can I say that hasn't been said?

    love it when I can "HEAR" it spoken!

    yesssss!


    a
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    :eek: ....and the reflextion in the mirror screams >>>TIGHT SCRIBE
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs.


    ...if TyghtToDeath & ThoughtProvoking were both a
    4 letter word... it would be spelled B L A K. :)

    i should start calling you the MailMan... cause you
    always deliver... da dopest ****!

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B-Verb

    Excellent in its depth and vision...tyght wark..az alwayz poet.
    peace
    g-man
     
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