Black Poetry : Xtreme Goodbye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Sep 7, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A toxic milieu of words
    Spewed forth from his pen
    Eradicating any and all feelings
    Of love
    A cauldron of hate
    A plethora of hurt
    All jumbled together in a sea of tears
    Laid neatly side by side
    Letter after letter , verse after verse
    Set in neat little lines
    Of goodbye
    He thought and thought
    For days on end
    How to make my last memory of him
    As painful
    As I had made a lifetime
    Of memories of us
    All the happy
    And the sad
    Mixed together to produce
    ....................Pain
    Dark storm clouds
    Formed of hurtful words
    And cutting marks
    Thunder clashing reverberating
    Overhead and the last line
    Is written
    Of goodbye


    Natasha
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Meditatin



    One
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin ya style

    Standing Ovation!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    LOVED DIS ONE ......YA EXTREMELY ON TARGET.!:kiss:
     
  5. Bishop

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    That's it Natasha...bring it on Xtreme Style!!
     
  6. alyce

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    Words....

    powerful tools....

    especially when written in the hand of a loved one our hearts can't... just....simply....delete.

    feelin this
    a
     
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