Black Poetry : XOXO

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Apr 22, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im strugglin
    drownig ina pool of emotions
    trying to figure out how to let go
    and @ the same time
    my mind is constantly thinking about growth
    new oppotunities with present company
    somin that i question should it be
    but at times looks and feel so good
    coments overlapping conversations
    about endless things surrounding life's misteries
    im fighting thohts of temptaitons being fulfilled
    damm i wish i knew what to do
    whether ima win or loose
    cuz @ times deep down inside
    my mind battles my bodies' deisres on what my actions shld be
    wat my limits should be and how this will all turn out
    sometimes
    i wish
    my capabilities wld fulfill my souls inablitiels to cure my cravings
    for immediate attension and love
    all these diferent thoughts have me working overtime
    for the man knowing i aint getting paid extra
    if only these emotions
    that are colliding, dividing, and multiplying
    to late nights of loneliness could disappearing to immense love
    filling my needs of physical touch
    touch that crosses all barriers
    levels more than jus his hands holding my body
    but more like his arms stretch and rapped around my inner soul
    quenching my hopes , fullfilling my wishes
    lighting my day from his presence
    keeping me glowing
    leaving me holding my head high
    i need that
    boy do i
    his aroma, his stride, his warmth surrounding me...
    undoing all my worries
    untying all my knots
    ooo i need that...
    dam... i need a hug...​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting some sort of deep physical touch, strong enough that it will calm the spirit within. I feel what you mean, and like the way you expressed it. So nice to read you again.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight and deep and kinda sad but when you speak of he or his are you talking about a lover man or god? but anyway enjoyed this one for real keep up the good works http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=33883 (peep this if you have time)
     
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    HUGS

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    Everyone needs a hug sometimes :tongue3:
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the way you hit the bridge right here
    on this quote
    and just flowed straight from the soul! :kickball:
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent write.
     
  7. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for all the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 up awesom feeling the emotions flowing in here
     
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    Oh heck yeah, I am so feelin this. Flow on, girl, flow on.