Black Poetry : X2C

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Apr 5, 2006.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everlasting
    Volumizing
    lavishing Emotions
    Overwhelming lucid value

    Stripped layers of deep thought
    Unwind relaxing my mind
    Connection permeating in many ways

    Eternal soul surviving
    Early memories
    Childlike feelings controlling the commotion
    Assimilating to unite within me

    Working obsessively
    Cultivating
    Massaging my internal

    Reflection of the other
    Manipulating your talents to ease my stress
    While you find guidance in my sight
    Getting lost in my eyes

    I want engulfing lessons of satisfaction
    Everlasting
    Abundant

    emotions
    Encompassed in your speech
    Meaning everything to me

    So please
    Just tell me you love me
    So I can crumble in ecstasy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa! this was heart taken very nicely done
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dis was a very lovable drop rite hurr
    i was feeling yo flo
    so flo on wit nonstop



    blackluva nd bp
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: poet!!!
    I likes that a lot.
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus wanted to bring this back around...
    every time i read it
    i smile..
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    this is hot very hot

    how come 237 or more views

    and only about 5 or 6 replies

    i don't get it

    this is hot poet

    peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And smile you should, poetess. This was an eloquently posed, titillating piece. Sorry I missed it the first time, thanks for bringing it back.