Black Poetry : X

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Nov 2, 2005.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My baby don't ask me if u r beautiful,i'll say 'no'

    Don't ask me if i wanna be with u forever,i'll say 'no'

    Don't ask me if i'll cry when u'll leave,i'll say 'no

    The truth is that....

    u r not just beautiful,u r the MOST beautiful n the sexiest woman i've ever seen

    I don't wanna be with u forever,i NEED to be with u forever

    I'll not cry if u leave...

    I'll die
     
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    nice confession of the heart

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh so sweet:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely your baby feel this heart felt scribe
     
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    This flow felt so genuine, simply from the heart.
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u,i feel very good right now n my baby girl will understand how much i care
     
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    WHOA :eeek:

    at first as I was reading I was like " gee thas kina mean lol"

    but I can see brotha you are jes a young man with his heart burnin for his love :)

    lovely my brotha jes lovely :read: