Black Poetry : WRONG?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brown_N_sassy06, May 3, 2005.

  1. brown_N_sassy06

    brown_N_sassy06 Member MEMBER

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    Wrong,
    Am i wrong for choosing an unrestricted life
    For giving him .... you a chance
    For laughing to loud
    For wearing tight and revealing clothes
    For always stiking a sexy pose
    For being me
    For not always looking "FLY"
    Wrong,
    for not sporting the new air force ones
    For not being a size one
    for walking with a switch in my hips
    For not giving a ****
    For messing with her boyfriend
    For claiming my dark skin
    For my hair which naps up when wet
    For not just being here but being a threat
    For being me regardless
    For doing the things i do and the things i say
    No?......
    Then tell me i'm right
     
  2. MrMister

    MrMister Member MEMBER

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    this was a fun read
    I liked it
    keep it up
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sho' U right.

    Do your thang.

    Peace.
     
  4. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AT-***-TUDE! loved it. you showed them
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no right to wrong on point
    this was smoothly laid out & spoken
     
  6. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling it

    i was really feeling it, i liked this alot!!! it was FIRE!!!!
     
  7. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *lemme think on it, and i'll get back to you* But yeh it was full of fire..flow on poet.
     
  8. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Wrong

    Very Nice.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing wrong in just being you, each person has to judge their own actions. Like the way you brought this flow.
     
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