Black Poetry : Wrong Answer Country

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why can't we all just get along
    As reasonable people do
    The answer makes a fool of me
    Consumed...
    It begs of you

    What is with the urge to kill
    A lifetime burning short
    Fired-up ~
    No lady luck
    Dead quick...
    My dawg been struck

    Why do we curse "The Man"
    Who couldn't give a [email protected]
    When everybody here
    Has bought into the land

    Why are the sexes embattled
    Fair love at war
    Honeymooning over
    Roving...
    Plague of whores

    Are we there yet
    With child abuse
    Divorce...
    Our romper suit
    Playing to a judge
    Paying-up to scoot

    Why write at all
    Should nothing ever change
    Country,
    City,
    Hamlet,
    A world...
    Unexplained


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this like u wouldn't believe, 1poet. Phenomenal flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!
    tyte flow indeed here
    i felt dis in many ways
     
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    Change is constant....

    and while our country truly makes you wonder...there are many
    we do not see, behind the scenes...evoking and implimenting
    that change...

    Very conscious flow, 1poet...........I really enjoyed this!
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Missed You All While Moving

    Back in the USSR, my bad; I meant these United Stakes... Thanks!
     
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    1PoetSought !!!!! Welcome Home !!!!! :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    yessssssssssssssssss.....

    "Why write at all
    Should nothing ever change
    Country,
    City,
    Hamlet,
    A world...
    Unexplained"

    you hit home with dis...
    you dealt it
    i felt it
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee really is like home, Ya'll know where I live... Ilove you!
     
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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY 1poet beez back...:)
    i missed your intellect round these parts my brotha :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At Your Service

    Those are very kind words indeed, thank you. :)
     
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