Black Poetry : written thots

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Random words
    Put so perfectly on paper
    With the ink of my heart
    Smeared
    To
    Perfection
    I
    Love
    The way I can just sit
    And my mind goes to work on paper
    Like you go on me
    Taking up class time
    Letting my mind
    Drift to lands I have never seen
    But fantasize about going
    I got visions
    Of my enemies turning out to be the man
    I wish I could love
    And me spending my days trying to go back
    These special thoughts
    That seem so ordinary to me
    But unique to all else
    Leave me wondering if I really know myself
    Cuz if I’m having moments like this
    Where I can just sit
    And my imagination controls me
    Giving me metal stimulation
    Then do I need a man
    Or
    Maybe
    Just ink
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ..wow daroc...nice piece...so amazing how the energies
    of the earth connect...i just finished a piece called mind movements (some of them are very old tho) and when i finished there you were with "thots"..i love the spelling and the fluidity of the work...
    and daroc...no "just" in it...tis which ever you wish at the moment...enjoy
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you out did ya self
    this was vibing and i really enjoyed this read...
    let that pen flow tight drop

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    interesting piece....
    keep dropin dem sis.....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Flow mental indeed! :read:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done to perfection awesome write daroc...........
     
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    With the "ink of your heart" you flowed this piece. I could almost feel the mind's thoughts cascading. I loved this.
     
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    you compose a a flow
    filled with balance through the end
    i was caught up in your scribe
    yes..this is a nice poem
    that let loose freely
    of your thoughts
    as you ink

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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