Black Poetry : Written Love Scenes

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    write
    love scenes
    of you and me
    on scented stationery
    in the solace of midnight silence
    whisperingly I recite in the moonlight
    my poetry that attest
    how
    (I love you)
    I
    pray
    the night wind
    will wisp my words away
    to your heart to let you know
    though at times it seems we are worlds apart
    (you are still my world)
    may
    I
    substitute gentle hands
    for sultry whispers?
    I
    o v e rstand
    physical contact is
    (sweetest still)
    but
    since
    we are
    (stricken distantly)
    I’d like
    the chance
    to
    please
    you
    poetically
    would you be open to
    sensuous wordplay allow them to foreplay
    as would my moist tongue and
    kisses on your skin?
    I
    know
    its not the
    usual love scene but
    I
    make
    love
    to
    you
    all
    the
    time
    (with my mind)
    every erotic line I write
    is
    about
    you
    and
    how
    you
    (properly)
    take
    me
    often I think about
    the distance between us and
    all the possible measures that could
    melt away the miles
    I
    make
    love
    to
    you
    all
    the
    time
    (in my mind)
    through my scribes
    on scented stationery
    in the solace of midnight silence
    whisperingly I recite in the moonlight
    my poetry that attest
    how
    (I love you)
    :hearts2:


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:



    © 2007cj
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco:
    OMG......
    When I tell you I LOVE this JOINT!!!!
    You did that sista....4real!!!!
    I can so relate to this:


    I
    make
    love
    to
    you
    all
    the
    time
    (with my mind)


    This is some HOTT PROPERTY here....
    Hella scribe!!!!


    Much Luv
     
  3. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THiS flo....was nothing short of amazing!!! Ah, how I relish in your words and feel them in my very own heart!

    Outstanding!
     
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    Nasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I was Reading

    I drifted into a serious fanatasy. That was extremely deep and mind altering.

    Can have more?

    Serious Flow Wit Feeling
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very delightful i could run away wit this one
    words can tell the story of this beautiful flow here...wow
    u talking to me ! lol
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The power of an imaginative mind... gotta love it!

    Thanks for the visit,
    4Ever
    Sweet
    Nasheed
    and
    Sir. Richness

    I always appreciate the driveby and the love left behind!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  7. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem flows like honey; warm, slow, and sweet to the taste.....
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flo on!
     
  9. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one is awesome
    i really love the way it flows, nice and slow
    great write
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mizjoice
    jus
    &
    nevar

    Ladies, thanks for your time spent reading and responding
    to this expression. I appreciate it, BIGTIME!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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