Black Poetry : Written Contents of a Blank Valentine's Card

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finally, a pen that writes...
    And what it would be...
    Would be...
    An appetizer
    that satisfies more thoroughly than either can convey
    Neither of us can get our fill
    We both desire the entire entree

    We take a few bites
    But find that just a sample won't do
    He must have more than a morsel, and
    and I need a complete serving of his stew

    Needing to decipher more ingredients
    The intrigue has bored deep
    Our bounties are chock full of the harvest
    that the other salivates to reap

    And those delightful want to get to know you feelings
    Are replaced by a need to know
    A need to grow
    past hey, I really like you, and golly gee
    you really like me
    A need to show
    that we
    have marinated into a unique gumbo

    And this type of flavorful bliss is more than
    just what Valentine's dreams and fairy tales are made of
    This...would be our own home grown recipe
    365 days of delectable love

    You know...this is one of the best
    Valentine's cards I've ever read
    Probably because everything
    in it that has been said
    Came from the slightly askew poetic musings
    that stir within my own head
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some of that "made to taste" kinda love soup...

    ...you got going on, hea. a SPEACIAL ORDER concoction...just for two. you just being you...and i'm always loving the mixture of you.

    the river floweth.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    finally, a pen that writes? ...a recipe that nurtures the entire soul 365? ...I'm hoping you pass that recipe around :deal:
    awesome piece of work poet, thanks.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss. Watz...

    I adore the poetic creativity that comes out of you! :)


    Lovely write!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe i just harvest in this and tasty too .....u go gurl flow head on mis V_Day !
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    Im with queen you must share.


    We take a few bites
    But find that just a sample won't do
    He must have more than a morsel, and
    and I need a complete serving of his stew


    Now thats what I'm talkn' about.
    The blank cards are always the best.


    Muvh Luv
     
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    Then stir on that musing gurl, cause you are just too good at what you do, Watz...

    I lovedided it! This delectably, poetry treat. Flow on Sis.



    epiphany:heart:
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes baller, made to order is definitely best, that was quite a kind response, for I appreciate your poetry as well. Thank you so much poet.
    Hey there queent, I think you already have that kinda recipe, in fact, I'll bet on it. Thank you so kindly sis.
    Why coco, I love your creativity as well, this was a fun write for me. So appreciated, I'm humbled.
    Sometimes folks reap a mutual bounty. Your response is much appreciated Rich.
    We tend to know what works for ourselves 4EverLuv, thank you so kindly poetess.
    You humble me epiphany, I'm so glad you're active on the board poetess, and I'm not just reading you from the archives, thank you.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Watz
    For sharing your pen.

    From a blank slate
    Form words that stimulate
    Telling all that desired and knew
    That a loving from two
    Between you and him too
    A serving of love that captivates.

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, a heaping helping of captivating love, thank you much Brother Hodee.
     
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