Quiet Poetry Lounge : Written.......can u hear me ?

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Each time pass moments shared
    only us in memories feelings of cares
    without u beside me leaves me bare
    with little hope in vision i stare'd

    I know we just begin yet so far
    our love errupt into scary notions
    yet da heart calls , beckoning
    for that single embrace

    Aften each ring and every knock
    we stand apart seeking comfort
    allow me inside your temple
    let me lace u in da oils of love
    and bath u unconditionally

    I have tryed to express my heart
    and left my soul upon ya step
    even given my time shared so u may
    once again see clearly of me

    Your newless wave has captured me
    inside a deep rapture where tis feeling
    has carried me
    my love lone yours at da bankz of tilly
    tonight just u and i can get lost into
    what we truely lone to share .


    Come share my world !!!!!!:qqb013:


    Another lonely letter written against da odds of love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With open communiation, the odds increase, and she'll hear you even clearer than ever. Such a gentle vibe to this scribe.
     
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    once one is heard i think a bond is in stored ....Thankz sista watz
     
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