Black Poetry : writing

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look up to the night sky my beautiful most beloved black man
    that is me zig zagging before our precious moon, building speed as i glide
    the stars beating drums, my wings catch afire, pink smoke trailing behind me
    i move the clouds aside, take a deep breath in and then exhale the word LOVE
    blowing out the city lights. the only thing aglow the love in our heart and soul
    and my flight of passion on fire, writing across the sky

    THERE IS NO ONE ELSE~ I AM ALL YOURS~ COME FLY IN MY LOVE

    spinning through the clouds to douse the fire but keep the heat and flames
    flying straight towards your inner glow to claim what is mine. no more games
    i will ask this only one more time.
    who. am. i?
     
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    I Am the generation of host
    Hosted to provoke the wisdom our for mothers and fathers taught us to be
    It takes a village to raise achild
    Not just the next door neighboor
    The down the street vendor
    Around the corner generational drunk
    The mother that always has sunday dinner ready @ 2:eek:h clock on the dot
    Also the Man we strive to become cause he taught me I Can Be Me
    Let us host the next generation with unknown knowledge
    That leads them to the truth
    Our true colors are gold not the old saying.....
    We will become and have been Queens and Kings of OUR kingdom
    Wherever we land
    There is our sculptures
    That we now live in
    Which the credit is Ours
    Let us tell them ourselves
    Who.I.Am
    The People who are here for good
    And
    Have conquered since who knows when
    I recently heard it been since 100,000 years ago with evidence
    I takes and village and facts and knowlege to build a child from Clay to Stoine
    Soldiers March On
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you from the villager, but the question still remains to him... who.am.i?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Well known magical Richness
    up up and away in da glistness
    journey the galaxy in a twist
    forth thy king in ya mist
    beyond da moons & starz
    in da orbs of ya soul
    as true love is sensually mold
    i fly , i fly
    cross da skies of love beat
    light of passion upon thy feet
    circling da devotion spirit
    feel me and know thou lyric
    for unto you humble queen
    forth tis love united scream
    for in my house not of this world
    but made for two to swril
    let da fire blow as it burn and float
    da clouds of nine where i glide n' slide
    to a heavenly dance of romance
    forth one be thy queeneth
    cometh
     
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    COMETH
    I that resudes through thie WOMBman
    To become the King that has been built ingold
    We shall envelope in One
    Us will conquer as one
    Never to be dis connected
    Natuarally not so
    Who I.Am
    Is who U r Forever
    Within this soul that has been built from the beginning of time
    Wth the light and image you c me and also u
    Haveth the responsibilty to build a monument
    Build a undying image
    We are right next to each other
    Within eachother
    Forever to come
     
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    My king let us fly wing to wing
    our love rising higher
    finding new sky to explore
    new oceans of sensuality to dip our flight in
    what has always been let it be done
    your queen has cometh home
     
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    For thou seat at da throne
    before thee i fly gently
    forth one's tenderness
    as the flames flicker n' dance
    so as i unto this skyline of love
    where as i you also
    for da queen of me is thee
    soon before da altar is we
     
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    destiny standing by fate
    a promise to be sealed
    for my love has never altered
    devotion unconditionally
    for all eternity at the altar
    my heart in your hand
    my hand in yours
    under soft candlelight
    for i believe
     
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    writing da foot note
    a note of love and
    everlasting by heart
    shall we fly !
     
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    Beautiful poetry, thoroughly enjoyed!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco :heart:
     
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