Black Poetry : Writers Block

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by conflict, Apr 1, 2009.

  1. conflict

    conflict Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is the end of the road
    as far as my story is told
    i just aint got nowhere to go
    not talkin bout my life talkin bout the flow
    writers block a brick wall
    to a lyricist this is a devestating pitfall
    im an addict
    i put the pen down and go through withrdrawl
    **** yall
    im fiending got the gleaming need to spit raw
    for some reason right now i just cant get off
    i need some inspiration i need a muse
    i need another word that rhyme just to pull me through
    i think i feel it comin on mic check one two
    those couple lines that i needed just came out the blue
    now what im gonna do
    put em down on paper just in case my mind blanks
    then maybe i can put an end to all this rhyme angst
    i draw inspiration from the world to fill my rhyme tanks
    this earth is full of beauty truly gotta give GOD thanks

    now back to the rhyme im writing:
    conflict is a lyrical titan
    i feel sorry for the mc thats biting
    because what i spit
    will split you right in half like a hyphen
    and if you bitin when you taste it its triflin
    ....................
    .............(d)(a)(m)writers block!!
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    dang so writer's block is a good thing then....

    nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What seem to be a brick wall
    ain't nuffin but a mental call
    ya pen drip ink standing tall
    lyrics rhymes u got it all

    Lay it down, bust in town
    make dem words leap n' bound
    writers block just a jock
    trying to raid ya spot
    but i know it ain't got
    nuffin on ya pen
    lyrically block is a sin
    so flow bro from within

    Poeticly i got ya back
    my flip ain't no slack
    when da ink drip and splat
    life is born like dat
    tip ya cap hit da canvas
    work da mic flow and write

    I feel ya but writers block
    about to be jock when i break
    my pen glot and blast da spot
    cause i know ya flow is hot !!


    Let da ink flow bruh ......
     
  4. conflict

    conflict Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always. i let the ink flow till somethin happens. thanks for the encouragement
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Awww, Sooky-Sookie, now!

    Conflict, your piece put "writer's block" in a whole 'nother dimension!

    If THIS is what "writer's block" is well, then, like Diana said, "If there's a cure for this, I don't want it. Don't want it. If there's a remedy, I'll run from it!"
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can really relate to this part in particular:
    Yes, sometimes all it takes are a couple of hard hitting lines, and you never know where that will take you. Relating to this, great write, welcome back. :)
     
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    no block as far as i can see...
    nice rhyme'n poet....

    one love
    khasm
     
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