Black Poetry : Writer's Block

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  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writer’s Block is a Bit(h
    She just pops up out of nowhere
    You just be writin’ and flowin, rhymin’ so fly
    Pen sliding so smooth over paper
    Like it was laced with KY
    Something like Alzheimer’s she steals your thoughts
    Makes you forget what you were gonna say
    How you were gonna say it…
    ****…that line was gonna be so good if had been properly laid
    She’s the phlegm in the back of your throat
    Backs your words up so far, she makes you choke
    Hate is such a strong word, but it’s perfect for her
    Cuz she makes your brain stutter, as if it’s having a stroke
    Like tryin to give birth to your love child
    And she right there pushin it back in
    Stops you up and gives you constipation
    She a hateful lil thing
    Scared to let your voice have wings
    Cuz you’ll leave her *** behind
    Somehow I managed to get this out
    And she didn’t seem to mind…this time

    ©August 2, 2007
    NapturallyYours
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great word play poetess, you gave Writer's Block what for, and kicked her to the curb. I truly enjoyed this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime da block can be a laps but great poet's like yaself alwayz
    bounce back wit fire and depth poeticly.......this will pass shortly !
     
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    I hear what you're saying and can surely relate,
    cause for over a year now, shes' been at my gate.

    There's a thousand things I want to pen down,
    but that wicked phlegm keep hanging round.

    We can't let that phlegn just lay in our throat,
    for in the darkest hour, it will cause us to choke
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was feelin this flow
    keep doing ur thang
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dam writer's block

    i see you made writer's block a female gender, huh? so, i guess grammatical errors will be the men. ha, ha. lol

    nice flow, naps.

    from ya boy,

    Shuga Shane, aiiiiiight!
     
  7. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone for showing me some love!

    Shane,
    You know I had to! Only a female be hatin on other females like that! LoL

    Peace
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ok this time lol

    writers block is a B

    and i think all writers can feel you on this poet

    peace
     
  9. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow i can mos def relate! keep doin watchu u do sista!!!
     
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