Black Poetry : Writer Right This Wrong

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writer right this wrong

    With your lovely song

    Soulful as a psalm

    Its edifying balm ~

    Writer right this wrong

    Wanting hearts along

    In such state of grace

    Calm before the storm

    Writer right this wrong

    Wasting hunger's pang

    Laced with awful aim

    Acts of guiltless shame

    How we carry on...

    Unloving who we are

    The killing of our sons

    Despising children born

    Writer right this wrong

    The lonely state

    Embrace :grouphug:

    So lovely is your song

    Worlds line up to dance


    Darryl Abdu Omari :geek:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just thinking about the power of words, and the strength of a piece when it makes the reader really think. Props to ya on this, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u scribe it to da max dat keep ya on yo toes awesome piece bruh !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right On... thank you, true blue.
     
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