Black Poetry : write your name across the skies* (inspired by $RICH$)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *things cease to exist without your pitch of heaven*


    needing you--
    to soothe my insecurities--
    calm my inner-self...
    i miss you--
    and all that you entail--

    days are sad when--
    i don't hear...'this is she*'

    (i smile when you say that)

    cherishing you--
    wish i had a step-ladder tall enough to--
    write your name across the sky--
    i'd taint clouds with the thought of you--
    and they would thank me--

    after feeling the undiscovered joy your name brings to me--
    the sky would hold your name--

    *ceasing to move*
    'i think i love you'

    (there it is)

    which is why--
    i think of you more than i think of life--
    and it's greater scheme--
    *will u have me?*

    silly question...

    i want you--
    to want me--
    *i see strawberries and think of you--

    do you think of me?

    i wish the atmosphere stood still long enough--
    for me to pay tribute to what your name means to me--
    *words won't do justice--
    *phrases are insignificant
    *essays couldn't narrate--
    *dissertations couldn't begin to breakdown--

    who u is to me.

    i want to ride a hot air balloon and space all eight letters of your first name--
    evenly across all twenty-five thousand miles of the world
    leaving all continents wondering what looms about--
    it is me.
    thinking of you--
    needing you
    cherishing
    you.

    and all that you entail.


    (u made me.)

    absencetrulydoesmaketheheartgrowfonder)
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUM!!!!

    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
    DID I DO THAT!!?
    WOW!
    WHEN WE SPEAK OF POETS
    I HAVE TO CALL YO NAME 3TIMES
    CHEERS:toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thepoetsean

    Sweet sounding symphony! Expressively written poet!

    One.
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah.
    i can definitely lose and find
    myself
    in this peace...
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moved

    becausey'all are.

    *in unison*


    sean.
     
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