Black Poetry : Write For Success

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Nov 18, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write For Success

    Try be cool in high school but my brain in part is about to
    Start out raw after a great cost take off onroute to pursue
    Knowledge possibly in college my soul goal was to write
    One day, my words tight had this urge to write so at night
    Stay up and practice hot grammar whackness is not glamour
    Flaws and restrictions could cause friction my brains hammered
    Not to have a corrupt mind and duck crime can get slandered
    With pensil and paper had a ballistic relation so therefore come up
    With an artistic creation which was beauty to duty significant luck
    Fought verbs and thought of words that could paint the Sistine Chapel
    Then eat a brisk clean apple like Michael Angelo no mean twisted babble
    Hurting for the truth and a burden of proof rest on my success unravels
    My future in writing concern about giving wanna earn a living and travel
    Places on gravel or air spaces its bitter how writing not considered real work
    Not an hourly job but I’m powerfully involved putting my pen to some alert
    Work that can perk rhymes like coffee so my mind lawfully hit home
    Love my plan its clever now rub my hand together now think
    Writing is for the rich got a bazaar itch for an ink pen teacher winks
    Her eye tell me to try guy say I’m a strong troop wit the wrong group
    Be legit not corrupt so split up with those ways, you don’t have to stoop
     
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    i see you...

    it's a good rule to stay in school...to learn the things that gives knowledge to you. that, one day, you will be rich and famous...glamourous...in the circles you move in...keep the groove thin...while you blend in with the "in crowd" you choose to hang with.

    i see this.
     
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    baller THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL
     
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    within self is the sucess of knowing who you choose and where u stand
    keeping the learning habit strong and movin with ease bring all you can endure
    bruh u took it there this time.....keep flowing
     
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    RICH THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL
     
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