Black Poetry : Write A Poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Oct 17, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    write a poem to me that captures my heart
    blinds my soul embraces my mind
    sending chills up and down my spine
    in a straight dotted line

    caressing the very essence of your time
    moving me with your words
    touching me with your thoughts
    so heavily sought

    for this love can't be bought
    caught in the midst of what you brought
    to the table willing and able to cut off
    the cable

    come mend me together from this stormy
    weather where we both may feather
    in beautiful heather

    write poems to me that no one else could tether
    open up the very depth of your heart and
    mind following the straight dotted line




    apt copyright 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    across da dotted line

    I offer my love my tyme
    as i bring this love shine
    mend ya broken whispers
    coz i be da mister

    now relax unwined
    get ready for my love devine

    as i embrace u to a gentle clutch
    hold u wit a lovin' touch
    caress ya mind as i kiss u
    up & down yo spine
    comfort u in perfection
    guide yo every direction
    wit affection
    lay u in compassion
    mesmerize and tenderlize
    yo beings as i sing dis song
    in my heart u find no wrong
    com'mo home where u belong.:heart: :kiss:
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...this is great!

    satisfaction guaranteed to have another write a poem for you...

    to see yourself through anothers eyes...

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: across da dotted line


    And let the magic of those words lift you to new places as every well done love poem does!
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *writing a poem*

    c if you can squeeeze me in dat bizzy schedule o' yours 2morrow,
    aight??

    nfinitely
    the dunn :wink:
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    *lmao*

    Richy, i thank you for the elaboration :lol:


    Kitana your words of wisdom are always welcome
    *i am loving your work girl keep it coming* :)

    Msluscious "OK" :lol: :lol: :lol:

    jh you know you're my sweetheart :lol: :wink:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT A WARM VIBE IN DA HOUSE!

    BE YO SELF THEN! PEACE AND PROSPERITY
    AND MAY THE MUSE VISIT YOU OFTEN! BJS:toast:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd, gurl...now, you know i'm lovin' this piece. keep on scribin', i'm still watchin'.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this has become one of my poetic delight favorites :wink:
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sup girl :wink:
     
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