Black Poetry : Wrapped

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Sep 15, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanna wrap you up in
    a gently yet firmly entwined hug
    One that makes you feel nurtured
    by an embrace that is soft and snug
    I wanna to coddle you in a blanket
    of warm fuzzies and security
    so you can cuddle up and sigh
    in all its genuine purity
    I want to spoon, and make you swoon
    from your head down to your feet
    make your body go limp, while you serenely
    breathe to the rhythm of my heartbeat
    What I want to do is enwrap the whole of you
    so that you will have no other choice
    than to just trust your instincts
    and listen to your inner voice
    I'm aware you're a grown man
    but I'm thinking, maybe, just maybe
    I can wrap you up one day
    and call you my baby
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    with every caress of wrap of thoughts can become reality of warmth in the wraps
    this was cuddly tame.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, warm thoughts can end up being wrapped up in reality, thank you Rich.
     
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    Wanna wrap you up
    tightly, securely, so you will know
    every single word and phrase
    before they even touch the page in flow
    I want to wrap every nuance, every
    drip drop of this love
    so you will know when you've been
    touched by an angel from above
    I want to enwrap you and hold you
    hush now babe, don't say a peep
    I wanna soothe you and slowly rock
    you until you fall off to sleep
    I want to continue to snuggle you
    as sweet images swirl thru your head
    my lids become heavy and I become a part
    of your dreams wrapped up together in our bed
     
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    i love this!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brotha for letting me know that you're loving this flow, appreciated ibrahim.
     
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    Wanna wrap you up
    69 and stuff
    Wrap my legs around you-Hard to get up
    Wrap my arms around you-Knock that frown up out you
    Wrap my heart around you
    You like the love I've brought you
    Wrap my tongue around you
    As my tongue arouse you
    Wrap my all around you
    I need you-But watizurname???

    Nice Flow Poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum,
    So, you wanna wrap me up
    in all of those things?
    Have me swooning and crooning
    for all that stuff your passion brings?
    My name is whatever my flow
    gives to you at that time
    So, just give me your reason
    and flow me your rhyme

    Thank you brotha poet
     
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    Watz...u had me so WRAPPED up in this flow...Enjoy this very much...Shoo...I'll be that baby..Lemme hop on ya lap...


    Peace!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ bigrdrizzle. Glad you got wrapped up in it brotha, thank you much.
     
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