Black Poetry : Wrapped Up!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wrapped up in this blanket on a cold winter night.
    What a night for you to pick a fight.
    I hear you tossing on the sofa and the tone of your
    grunts.
    I know I have to give in cause for sure you won't.
    I know a woman is not easy to understand but
    then sweetheart neither is a man.
    For years we shared each others burdens , dreams,
    joys and regrets.
    But, just a few misplace words and how soon we do
    forget.

    I know you got to have the last word, "That's what
    my Momma said" and "Never go to bed angry or with
    wrath upon your head".
    But, **** if I do and **** if I don't
    I will if I can, and most times I won't
    Give in to childish manipulation, or feed
    that insecurity that lashes out at those
    we love and those we need

    So I am wrapped up in this blanket in this King sized
    bed.
    While you are wrapped up in your emotions with a
    thumping in your head.
    Can't we say we're sorry , cause we both know we
    were wrong.
    I been loving you for much to long.

    Wrapped up in being right all the time

    Might make you feel righteous, but not right all the time.
    Playing out scenario's unfinished by your original family.
    Why do I have to be your whippin tree?
    So I drag my tired *** up from my warm place to sleep.
    And down the stairs I creep to peep, to see if you are
    sleep. I see you close your eyes real tight, just like a
    frightened child might. I tell you in a whisper how much
    I love you still.

    Wrapped up in each other's arms as we climb the stairs
    together.
    Maybe next time we have a fight , it will be in warmer
    weather........
    BJS (c)2001
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms Lucious

    Where you been?!? it's been a while since I read you ma... So much emotion in this peice.

    Much respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    winter breeze

    emotional bliss cuddle tyght inside of this
    whispers of care felt everywhere
    pop on da head and off to bed
    gurl i feel ya like before and now i wish 4 more!
    ya been gone too long come on home where u
    belong right or wrong .......da last word ..:heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS SO MUCH!

    Rich and Reason, I do appreciate your support.
    And trust me I have no intentions of leaving Destee.
    Just got to take care of the money making aspect of
    my life right now and it is taxing and wearing on a sista's
    mind. So pray that the creative flow will return on a more
    regular basis.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya sistah!

    gotta get my taxes ready ..........
    hey do stop by and sign my guessbook.......below!:D
     
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