Black Poetry : WRAPPED UP IN YOU

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could have one lifetime wish :spinstar: , one wish :spinstar: that would come true,
    It would be to live in a one room shack..., but that SHACK would be filled with just you :x: .

    For you are my everything...inside and out,
    to me, you are what the world is about.

    I've waited so long to feel this love that I have, I waited so long to display it :love: ,
    that I couldn't think of anything worst in this world...than to have you "MIS-USE and BETRAY" it.

    I'm telling you that...to tell you this:"A GOOD WOMAN IS HARD TO FIND" :angel1: ...
    to turn your back on a good thing like this...would be a :heart: breaking crime. :uzi:

    My love surrounds you wherever you go...anywhere you look...you will see it,
    and whatever you want from me out of life, whatever...then so shall be it.

    My whole world is wrapped around you "DEAR MAN"
    I've put all I have right into it,
    I've circled this world all over again...and I'm sure...
    only you can do it. :heart:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, sounds like this man has taken his essence and wrapped you up in it. You posed this wonderfully, yes, I could feel it. Flow on poet of the week.
     
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    very nice
    flow on.....
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the sweetness of touch
    this was awesome .....wow
    poet of the week flow on sistah
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...
    Mzblkangel...
    watzinaname...

    you got my head :roll: ing all over this place...with joy...and I can't stop :) ing
     
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    truly this is indeed a beautiful scribe:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    see why you got poet of the week! Nice, very nice
     
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