Black Poetry : Wrap in the pain

[Just_Me]

I am so loving this. You are so talented

 

[$$RICH$$]

thank u it was a deep mental wrap
Just Me u too are very well talented

 

[MrAdams]

re: hi

good-afternoon $$RICH$$ ,


just decided to check out this poetic piece before logging off...

torn deep
striped wide
lost in the pain
of deeper cares
my heart flooded
with the unknown
and my mental
crossed into a land
of what was or
what could be , if !
inside the journey
of reasons a hope lay
yet unspoken of
many before me pass
this way jet by in
the speed of light
the pain of it left upon
me like a wild deep cry
my salty tears dry white
on my cheeks and my
mind run into the depth
of the pain unknown
the hope looms heavy
the river bleed red
the sorrow hollow out
hoot in the windz
wrap in the pain

where's da love & cares ?
deeper in the mind
and crazy beat of stressed
notions yet i have an answer
as heaven open up and send
the message to the landz
the pain weight heavy

guess we all have been there before my friend... one feels lost and hopeless... no one turn to, as in a way, we all just want to recognize for what we have accomplished... indeed you have been a blessing for this POETC BOARD as without you, there will be NO DESTEE in reality... so many poets look up to you brother... keep up the good work...


sincerely,
mr. africa

 

[$$RICH$$]

thankz brutha this message u drop touched deeply to my
heart and i know hope is alive and well ....peace thankz 4
the love and wisdom drop here

 

[sarcasm4eva]

aww, what happened to the happy rich i know?? keep ya head up, this to shall pass. much love