Black Poetry : Wrap in the pain

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    torn deep
    striped wide
    lost in the pain
    of deeper cares
    my heart flooded
    with the unknown
    and my mental
    crossed into a land
    of what was or
    what could be , if !
    inside the journey
    of reasons a hope lay
    yet unspoken of
    many before me pass
    this way jet by in
    the speed of light
    the pain of it left upon
    me like a wild deep cry
    my salty tears dry white
    on my cheeks and my
    mind run into the depth
    of the pain unknown
    the hope looms heavy
    the river bleed red
    the sorrow hollow out
    hoot in the windz
    wrap in the pain

    where's da love & cares ?
    deeper in the mind
    and crazy beat of stressed
    notions yet i have an answer
    as heaven open up and send
    the message to the landz
    the pain weight heavy
    :eeek:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where's da love and cares? well you got some right here, babe. :grouphug:

    Pain is seldom this beautifully expressed. I love your language. And my thoughts and love are with you right now, brother $$RICH$$.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    W O W!!!!!

    Lovin ya versatility...truly felt the weight of the pain
    Nita :heart:
     
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    i could feel this
    deep write my friend
    it took me in
    liking the flow indeed
    this was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the battle of life
    and the cares of
    lovin is the first
    line to hope
    the pain that i feel
    is deeper and mentally
    stressful my journey
    is almost over
    where it lead only GOD knows
    before my ending i will rise again
    maybe not in this way but
    surely the next
    as i weep in the sorrow of today
    i fear not but walk on
    the love of thou heart carries me
    the faith is a blessing away
    peace in the valley for me somewhere
    Thanks family for feeling sometime that has taken me under

    Angel , Nita , gempis i luv ya all peace
     
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    I am so loving this. You are so talented
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u it was a deep mental wrap
    Just Me u too are very well talented
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon $$RICH$$ ,


    just decided to check out this poetic piece before logging off...



    guess we all have been there before my friend... one feels lost and hopeless... no one turn to, as in a way, we all just want to recognize for what we have accomplished... indeed you have been a blessing for this POETC BOARD as without you, there will be NO DESTEE in reality... so many poets look up to you brother... keep up the good work...


    sincerely,
    mr. africa
     
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    thankz brutha this message u drop touched deeply to my
    heart and i know hope is alive and well ....peace thankz 4
    the love and wisdom drop here
     
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    aww, what happened to the happy rich i know?? keep ya head up, this to shall pass. much love:)
     
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