Black Poetry : Wounds

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My net worth is not how much I have amounted
    I am worth over 1.2 million in social circles I don't count it
    It means nothing.

    I am not happy with our relationship
    I feel broke because I don't have the love of my life.

    I thought you were with me so I made you my wife.
    Divorce you can have all the money and the house.

    I will go on to find happiness.
    You don't want to make me happy then just leave me alone.
    Are you crying for you? Are you crying for us?
    Are the tears of fear of what you will do?
    As the fortune we have and built.
    When I leave melt away.

    I know now someone else deserves me and what I give.
    Someone who wants to love
    To grow with me and build.
    Someone who would cherish what I give
    More than wealth but a future based in truth I can speak.

    You have a chance to build what you portray in their site.
    I am tired of the lie in my life every night.
    I can't sleep I can't rest knowing the story told isn't true.
    The one about me and the one involving you.
     
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    Wounds you have will heal when you let me take care of them for you! Cause you got a friend here. I feel the pain and the emotion in this piece. Flo on!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man you been in my bank book looking at my gross love and worth
     
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    I felt this. When we feel invisible to someone we care about, it makes us feel neglected and unappreciated. I believe it's possible for a person to see their loved one clearly again, although it's not easy. Peace to ya Hodee.
     
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    the wounds we get build us into the person we are thanks for sharing some of who you are.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank goodness we know that wounds heal...
    they make time to , but they do
    and whats wonderful is that you understand that one has to tend the wounds (creatively, physically, whatever way) for the healing...
    loh..if you kilo..tis a badge of honor (smile)
    nice to read you again hodee
     
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