Black Poetry : Would you still love me?

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would you still love me?

    Would you still love me if I didn’t wear the latest threads?
    If I was shot and resting in my grave?
    Would you love me if I hadn’t confessed to all the mistakes I had made?
    If all my stylish looks were fade?
    Would you still love me after ALL that was said?

    Would you still love me if I still grinded on the block?
    Didn’t invest or have a single stock?
    Would you still love me if my heart was solid rock?
    If instead of R&B I liked Rock?
    Would you still love me if I was that same hard knock?

    Would you still love me if I WASN’T a positive leader?
    Instead I was the leader of the neighborhood drug dealers?
    Possessed those same skillz of a expert stealer
    Would you still love me if I turned into a mass murderer?
    Would you still love me if I wasn’t realer?

    Would you still love me if I was poor and on the streetz?
    If I walked around like a bum with nothin’ to eat?
    Would you still love me if my lyrical flow were off of me?
    If my poems had no rhythm for beatz?
    Would you still be glad to tell me you love me?

    Would you still love me if I had Alzheimer and forgot about me?
    Forgot about you and who you be?
    Walked away from the life of me
    Into one of bad to be free?
    If I was no longer me, your one and only foxylady?

    Would you still love me if I didn’t tell you I love you?
    If I we were broken away from each other and through?
    Would you still have love for me and lots to store?
    Would you only love me more and more?

    Would you love me if I was confused in the mind?
    If I tried to be ahead but only remained behind?
    Tried to stay straight but still possessed a crooked line?
    Would you love me if my body wasn’t as fine?
    Tell me, would you love and be kind?

    Would you still love me if I worked at Wing King?
    Would you still love me and tell your peeps I was your Wing Queen?
    If I was drew up in myself and mean?
    If every word that came out my mouth was unseen?
    Would you still love me and liked to be seen?

    Would you still love me if I was black as night?
    If my hair was nappy like Donomic
    and orange bright?
    Would you still love me if my teeth were out of sight?
    Even if you had no freedom or right?
    Would you still love me with all your might?

    Would you still love me if instead of black I was white?
    If I didn't look up to see the bright?
    If everytime we looked at each other we were in a fight?
    Would you still love me or tell me to take a hike?
    Or would you love me right?

    Would you still love me if I was a racist?
    If I didn't like any color except my the bestest?
    Would you still love me or time be a waste to us?
    Would you still love me and think I was the funniest?
    Or look a me and think I was the dummiest?

    Would you still love me if I spent no time at home?
    If I left you at home all alone?
    If I love you but it seemed that I couldn't stay prone?
    Would you still love me if I never phoned?
    Would you still love me or tellme to go home?

    Would you still love me if I wore Payless shoes?
    Stayed at your house and didn't pay the dues?
    If I were with you just to use?
    Would you still love me and stick like glue?
    Would you still love me if I didn't love you?

    Would you still love me if I was a civil right leader?
    Turned husband beater?
    No better yet a sexy singer?
    Turned bad lawyer?
    Would you love me or not want to go any further?

    Would you still love me if I didn't know the right places
    To put the embraces?
    Would you still love me in the any case?
    Would you still love me without haste?
    Would you still love me and caress my face?

    Would you still love me is I drove a Pinto?
    If I kept stuff from you that I didn't want you to know?
    Would you still love me if I was rich turned po'?
    If I love you but wanted to keep it on the low?
    Would you love me or let me go?

    Would you still love me if I didn't think you were MY soulmate?
    If I denied all the feeling you helped create?
    If we were on two different paths of fate?
    Would you still bring your body into my gate?
    Would you still love me or drop me without a wait?

    Would you still love me if I was a imate?
    If I beat you down and remained in that same state?
    Would you still love me if with sex I wanted to wait?
    If all I wasn't true with my feelings and showed you nothing but hate?
    Would you love me or drop me before the second date?

    Would you still love me if I had a 9 in my right hand and 45 in my other hand?
    If I was unaware of how we struggle to stay on our African land?
    Would you still love me if I was the only one to mess up the marching band?
    If my head was flat as a pan? :spank:
    Would you still love me or never talk to me again?

    Would you still love me if I was a teenage mother?
    If I was a darranged and abusive daughter?
    Would you still love me if I had no father?
    If I was a cheap @ss plummer?
    Would you still love me if I wasn't driving a H2 Hummer?

    Would you still love me if I was hot?
    Too hot to trot?
    Would you still love me if didn't deserve all the things I got?
    If I was stubborn and what not?
    Would you still love me or drop me me like the cup was hot? :coffee:

    Would you still love if I was you?
    If I was not the one for you?
    Would you still love me if no one knew?
    If I was not your boo?
    Would you still love me or think of me as a fool?

    Well, the answer to these questions for you
    Is YES I would love you
    I would love you if we were done and though
    Even if no one knew
    I would STILL love you and ONLY you

    I would love you even if there was no one else to love
    Because I believe that you were put her for me from the man above
    So as his wishes are granted it's you I will love
    And if these feeling were ever n the move
    The moment I see you again you will have that pull

    So, YES I will love you more and more
    More than the days could compore
    I love you to the core
    Heres my heart watch it roar!!!!!!
    I LOVE YOU...........it's you I adore :luvv:




    TO MY SOULMATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: Nice read....... lovin it.... like ur other poems... always nicely written....
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite nice....unfortunately you will never know be cause you are you and can't nobody do you like you or be you like you do, so don't worry about it as long as the love you got is true, boo!!
    Eternal
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you're lovin deep...into the soul..I get what you mean...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write foxi
    enjoyed readin
    peace
    Angel
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for readin fam.......and yes I love soul DEEP..........and MORE....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya heart flow from within
    would u still love me ???
    is the true key tyte scribe sistah
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the comfort of unconditional love
    what a beautiful thing! :)

    thanks for sharing


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank Rich and coco for readin my poem........thanks for ffelin this one in particular
     
  10. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it.
    It looks like you are a bit afraid of tommorow -i don't know why i think that,maybe because....your poem seems to come from your heart-
    Very nice one
     
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