Black Poetry : Would You Be My Wife?

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sent to me on Friday by my boyfriend of 3 years. He is incarcerated. I need help from my Destee family in awnsering him...(The awnser is yes) Tell me what you think.......

    Will You Be My Wife (written by: DeShaun)

    I prayed and asked God for you to be my wife
    For you are the one with whom I want to share the rest of my life
    Your love is special, rare, tru and one of a kind
    I'm so thankful that the Lord has made you mine
    Would you be my wife?

    I promise to love, protect, and forever be by your side
    Forever suprising you with gifts, keeping those beautiful eyez open wide
    Would you be my wife?

    For it's you and only you I truly adore
    And you loving me has made me only love you more
    Symbollically, our love has made our hearts as one
    I know in my heart that our lives together will be so much fun
    Would you be my wife?

    I promise to respect you, treat you with loving tender care
    I'll love you through good and bad times, I'll always be there
    I'll love you when I'm up,
    I'll love you when I'm down
    I'll love you when you make me smile
    I'll love you when you make me frown
    One thing you can rest asssure
    My love will always be around

    So I present to you my heart, accept it and treasure it the rest of your life
    Heather baby, I need to know, "Will you be my wife?"



    Now I know it's a little cheezy.:) But coming from a thug i was taken off guard. I need some help in the respose. I'm never speechless, but this time i seem to have writer's block. HELP ME FAMILY! Thanks:kiss:
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cheezy as hell but damnit I like it!!!!!!!!1

    I dunno how to answer him yet..its too late for my mentality to kick in..ill get at this tomorrow

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm awaiting your words SwtT.

    COME ON FAMILY I NEED SOME HELP ON THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think as soon as he gets out girl......
    You say yes till ya forget what yes means.
    This takes true love and commitment.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the words of Floetry......

    All you gotts do is SAY YES!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    I hate to be negative, but I would say no or at least let's wait and see.

    Give it some time to see if what he says is really his true emotions.

    Be there for him, but wait until he gets out and see where your love goes.

    I wish you all the best. Love is a beautiful thing if it is true and real.

    I hope all works out for you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Sierra.,, I m kinda glad you wrote that cuz you make a great point... Some men will write anything to keep you sweetie...Just wait til he gets out of jail to see if his love is for real ok?

    :heart:

    SwtT
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to sierra and SwtT for your realness. I know he's for real though. We've been friends since we were 5. We've messed around since I was 16. We've been together, together for 3 years. He has no reason to lie to me because he knows I'm not going anywhere. He had asked me to marry him before, he called it "ghetto engaged" because he didn't have a ring, this time though I guess he had a ring put up at his mama house. I know this is the person I'm suppossed to spend the rest of my life with. If you read into my other pieces, you'll see how deep my love runs for this man. But thanks once again for the realness. It's good to see yall lookin out for me! Much love for that. So, is anyone gonna help me out with a response??????
     
  9. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PlayWitItPimp: True love and commitment. My middle names. Thanks for the comments not only on this piece, but on all the rest too! Much Love :luvv:
     
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    alize...
    we can't write what is in your heart...
    this is something that you have to pray on...
    and believe me, with time...
    the words of love will flow like a river
    enough for your man to catch a chill
    and a shiver...
    peace
    khasm
     
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